English 4B
The topic is :
Your Home.
Home
is a place for people to lives . In
there, usually people have take a rest or just
enjoy the moment with their
family. Not only for many people but also for me home is a comfortable
place. I want to describe to you about my home. It has strategic location. The
location are 10 minutes to mall ska ,7 minutes to Eka hospital and in front of
my home is a mosque.
My home has some specification. It color is green . It has two floor . In the first floor there are several rooms like waiting room for guest ,living room,dining room,kitchen room and a small library. The second floor there are three bedrooms and a small room for family. Besides about the rooms it has small garden .there are some beautiful flower . In the beck side there are a small pool fish.
At home i live with my parents and my little sister . Our house is our favorite place for together. That's why i say that home is a comfortable place. I think that's all i describe you about my home,thank you and please give me some suggestion and critical if i have a mistake.
Home is like a bed for me. A bed for make a dream and for just take a rest. home is a one of a good place for gathering with people our love.
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Home is a place where I felt safe, comfortable,and quiet
BalasHapusa house is like heaven for us, so we should be good tenants:)
BalasHapusmy home my paradise :)
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I think, the house is the most convenient place to take refuge :)
BalasHapusi think, after "that's all" add a comma
BalasHapusbefore "thank you" add a period
(in the last paragraph)
thank you for all coment :)
BalasHapus